Peer Assessmanent: How successful is your flatplan?

In our lesson today, we had to swap our flatplans and mark each others. We gave some detailed feedback on what was great about the designs and what might need improvement.

Precious, my class mate, marked my flatplans of the music magazine against the criteria given by Miss Silva. From this constructive criticism I gained some reassurance about what I had done so far. My layout suited my target audience well and I had a good understanding of the conventions. However I also know that I must make improvements to the following:

Add more fonts to the front cover

Add more text on the double page spread
Add colour
To make sure my flat plan has all these corrections, I am going to create another flat plan where the changes will be made.